Is Poor Copywriting Killing Your Conversions?

If you are failing to make sales online, have you considered whether or not poor copywriting is killing your conversions?  It doesn’t matter how good your product is – if you cannot get it into the hands of customers then it will not have the opportunity to be a success.

The definition of copywriting in Wikipedia is this:

“Copywriting is writing copy for the purpose of advertising or marketing. The copy is meant to persuade someone to buy a product, or influence their beliefs.”

This definition implies that writing with the purpose of selling something is a different kind of writing.  Copywriting is therefore a skill that has to be acquired because it is different to the normal way that you write.

Top copywriters can command large fees because creating copy that converts well is a highly-regarded skill which will make or break the sales of your products and services.

Perhaps the biggest mistake made by online entrepreneurs is the failure to create copy that converts well.

If you fail in this area, your sales will be sub-optimal, your traffic will be expensive because you have to drive more of it to reach your sales  goals and you will find it difficult to attract affiliates.

A LOT of your success or otherwise will be dependant on your copy.

I was therefore interested to find a product called Advantage Bot (- a horrible name! -) which can predict whether or not your copy will convert well with an 85% success rate.

AdvantageBot contains a built-in database of over two hundred and seventy thousand profitable and unprofitable ads. It allows you to score your own text against this database for profitability.

Advantage Bot

You can use this tool for:

  • Sales pages – to craft killer headlines, body copy, stronger bullet points, powerful calls to action and more
  • Email marketing – to create subject lines to boost your open rates and powerful calls to action to increase the click through rate
  • Ad campaigns – to boost the click through rate and to reduce your testing costs
  • Scripts – use the tool to create your video scripts to increase conversions

I own Advantage Bot and you will find that it throws up some interesting results.  For example, if you are looking for the wording for a call to action button, you can put variations into Advantage Bot to determine which has been scientifically proven to convert better – is it ‘Buy Now’ or ‘Add to Cart’?

If you chose the latter option then you would be right!  But you wouldn’t know it without testing – this tool removes the need for testing. Here is an outline of the scoring system:

Advantage Bot Scoring System

However, you may still want to test whether it works for you and whether you can improve your results.  So Advantage Bot also comes with a little tool called A/B Optmizer which allows you to split-test any of your copy just to check that Advantage Bot was correct – Advantage Bot is statistically right only 85% of the time so it is not fool-proof!  This is how the AB Optimizer interface looks – really clean and simple:

AB Optimizer

Here are some useful copywriting tips that came with Advantage Bot:

Copywriting Overview

Copywriting Headlines

Copywriting - The Power of 3

Copywriting Sub-Headlines

Copywriting USPs

Copywriting - The Power of 3

Copywriting - Guarantees

I recently held a Hangout with Carl Picot who has released a product called Millionaire Copywriting Mastermind.  If you listen in to this interview Carl you will hear that we both agree that copywriting is possibly THE most important skill for an internet marketer.

Millionaire Copywriting Mastermind is a collection of interviews with some of the top copywriters around today who reveal some of the methods that make them some of the most in-demand copywriters.  Whilst Advantage Bot will enable you to carry out tests without spending money, Millionaire Copywriting Mastermind will help you to come up with the copy to test so both products complement each other.

If you purchase either Advantage Bot or Millionaire Copywriting Mastermind through my links then I would be happy to give you a copy of my report entitled ‘The Ultimate Copywriting Swipe File’ which is a report that I prepared based on a thread in the Warrior Forum where the Warriors revealed their favourite copywriting  swipes.  I compiled this information into a handy little report with links to the resources.

If poor copywriting is killing your conversions then these two products – Advantage Bot (which comes with A/B Optimizer) and Millionaire Copywriting Mastermind – will undoubtedly help you.

 

 

Shakespearean Copywriting

I’ve been indulging in a bit of Shakespearean Copywriting this week.  I completed my eBook entitled ‘What You Can Measure You Can Manage’ and this in now on my site http://measurenmanage.com.

I will be completing this product with an Excel spreadsheet as I develop my own management information system.  There is already a nice bonus on the site – 5 videos about mastering Google Analytics.  This bonus is relevant because MeasureNManage is all about running your business by the critically important numbers.

I have written the sales page for this site but I now need to create the JV page, list the product on JVZoo and integrate JVZoo with my membership script.

The Ultimate Copywriting Swipe File

I have also created an eBook today on copywriting called The Ultimate Copywriting Swipe File – this is a combination of some PLR material I had about copywriting and a list of copywriting swipes that I obtained from The Warrior Forum.  This book will be used for 3 purposes:

  • as a bonus on a fellow coaching colleague’s (Matthew Houghton) solo ad product
  • as a bonus on my next product which is called Email-ATM
  • as a free giveaway on a squeeze page to build my list.

Here is the eCover I designed:

Copywriting-Ecover-First

I went with the Shakespearean Theme because of the fact that I live in the town where he was born and died – Stratford-upon-Avon!!

My Secret Copywriting Weapons

Advantage Bot

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You can get more details about Advantage Bot here.

Paper Template Plugin

When writing my own sales letters, I mainly use the Paper Template plugin by Robert Plank.  It does what it says on the tin – you follow a template for creating your sales letter.

Here is a demo on how this plugin works:

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You can get more details about the Paper Template plugin here.

A Content Creation System by Omar Martin

This is a note that Omar wrote in one of the Facebook Groups I am a member of.  I thought I would share it here as it looks like a good system.  (I use Camtasia (or Easy Video Suite) and Powerpoint rather than Screenflow and Keynote to make my videos because I use a PC rather than a Mac.)

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“I tend to use audacity quite a bit for narration but other than my brain, the most influential tools I use to create content are decisively Screenflow and Keynote.

I use the 5-5-5 method for drafting a quick outline on a particular topic. This means I create 5 subheadings and put them on Keynote slides then I add 5 bullets to each slide. I hit record on Screenflow and press play on Keynote then I talk for at least 5 minutes on each slide.

5 Slides + 5 Bullets + 5 Minutes = A 25 – 30 minute video.

I try to create 3 or 4 of these videos on the same general topic and then hand them over to a transcriptionist or ghost writer that converts the content into a 100+ page book.

Content creation is only as complicated as we chose to make it.”

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Creating my Own WordPress Plugins

Creating my own WordPress plugins has long been a goal of mine but I have been reluctant to get involved in an area that I have little or no expertise in.  I bought into Peter Garety’s Software Mechanics course about a year ago but Peter seems to have lost interest in this programme which was a bonus to another product.

However, on the recommendation of Andrew Hunter (who is himself a plugin creation expert), I bought Plugin Creation Blueprint for $37 when it was launched on 2nd September.  This is an incredible product for the money and made by a coding expert called David Vandenburg.  It has been made with meticulous care and the membership site is incredibly good too.  This guy calls himself the CodeKing and I can see why.

If you have aspirations to get into the business of creating plugins then Plugin Creation Blueprint is definitely worth investing in.

G-Font Plugin

I also bought the developers license for the G-Font plugin – this plugin enables you to use around 600 Google Fonts on your WordPress sites – it works with most themes.  As you can see from this page, I have played around with some of the Menu fonts.

I felt that this was a good investment as it means I can customise the fonts on any theme and make it my own!!  I also love fonts – they just make your text so much more interesting to look at! I hope you agree!!!!

Thank You Tsahai

One of my colleagues, Tsahai de Silva, sent me a message this week – this is part of what she said – it means a lot to me:

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I have some superb friends online – this is vitally important to me as internet marketing can be lonely at times. With friends like this I am rich indeed!